oh now i'm sad...
that was thoroughly depressing and quite well written

Man! That is ANGSTY! Why are you called Pookamonga?

oh this is so heart breaking but the writing is gorgeous. how are you going to get our favourite couple out of this? update soon omgz!

Very nice. Awaiting more wonderfulness.

good story so far!

Wow! That's all I can say. Can't wait to find out who the girl is and how it all links up.

So very sad. D:

Eager for more, though!

This is incredibly deep and intense. I'm now wondering who the girl is... I also liked how you described Rodney's reaction to the news about Sam. And how it's unclear whether or not she's gonna live. The description you used for time and all that jazz in the last part was amazing. I can't wait to see more!

I can't believe that I missed this fic. It's gripping and yet you've only just begun. Gut wrenching actually. You need to get yourself into gear and update QUICK SMART because now I'm hanging on my seat!

*elly*

You NEED to continue this story. I shall not survive if you do not. I will be eternally grateful if you should be gracious enough to post a new chapter. Some of the sentences dragged out in the beginning; too many adjectives, but that pretty much disappeared for the duration of the chapter. Please, /please/ continue this. I beg of you.

I have one word for this story: WOW!

This was a very interesting setup and I can't wait to see where you're going with it (that was Sam Carter you just viciously ran of the road wasn't it?).

But please for the love of god; No more songfic. I think it might actually be banned on (copyright maybe?) and really no one ever bothers to read the lyrics. Some random obscure song can't tell your message better then you can. You really don't need any help :).