My second favourite VK pairing skillfully brought to life by you... -sighs dreamily- reading your stories is like tasting heaven =P

faith ^_^

Lovely! I hopee you make it around to finish this story. I am very curious to see how the rest of the time here goes with his mother wanting things from him. I understand her need, but it is so sad to think that Senri is betraying Takuma by doing intimate things with someone other than him. I hope he can eventually get away from what his sick mother wants of him for his and Takuma's sake. They need to have their own life together.

Thank you for yet another amazing story! I can't wait to see if you'll continue this plot at all cause I'd love to see more! I think you are one of the most talented authors I've been privileged to read (and I'm a HUGE book nerd). I've never been captivated by Fan Fiction before reading Domination found off a google search. I came back to read one or two more stories and then couldn't stop. I'd end up waking up thinking about one of your stories and the plot development in it and I'd have to come back and read another one.

I read them out of order but I'm proud to say I've gone back to read through every single story in the Duet series from cover to cover (does that term count online? hehe).

Your characters are so vivid and interesting that I feel like I've made a bunch of friends in them. I went back and started to reread the full Manga series this week and have been amazed at things I didn't notice or a connection I feel with the vampire supporting cast that I never had before. I never noticed Takuma and Senri's blood sharing at the Night Dance as anything romantic or sweet before. Or how Aido always does need to be roughed up a bit by Kaname to be kept in place. I hardly noticed their personalities at all before. I have your stories to thank for that.

I'm subscribed to every update you might write and I'll be pouring over them every time a new one comes out. Thanks so much for all your hard work!

-Tracey

Could you please update?

update soon =D

Aw, Senri and Takuma are the cutest. Does Midori ever find out about their relatonship? I mean they did do it in the house with his mother still there...

aww shiki and takuma are so cute together :D Good plot i can see something like this happening wouldn't that be really cool :D

Omg I loves it so much.

Tamaki and Senri are the best ever and this story is amazing. You are a very good writer!

omg, this is so good. o.0 i had to read it twice

aw that was sweet i havnt been reading much on this pairing but this story just made it soo interesting! i love it please update soon

Have I ever told you just how MUCH I adore your style of writing Shiki/Takuma?

Jesus, if I haven't, I wonder where my head was for the past million years. ._.

That was so sweet. The cutting and their mutual excitement was very well done. You sure can turn a phrase.

aw, so sweet~

So hot! I was looking forward to this.

They were so sweet in the end. Senri finally saying it, no wonder Ichijou is surprised and ecstatic. Should have followed him into the shower. Lol.

Very good. Encore!

LP

Hi there again!! That was a chapter with a lot of dark waves running underneath and apparently simple surface. I mean, it seems to be just a lemon scene, but it gave a lot of clues about the character's behaviour, specially from Shiki. They relationship reminds me a lot about Beauty and the beast. In this case, Shiki would be the beast: he sees himself like that and probably it's half true, 'cause HE IS USING Takuma to feel better and to vent the sexual tension and the dark feelings his mother makes him feel.

On the other side, I can't believe Takuma could really be such an agelic person, he must have some dark trait *scrutinizes him up and down*. Maybe he's so involved with Shiki because he makes him feel needed, which could be a selfish motivation. I know, I tend to find dark twists everywhere ;-p

Uh..I liked a lot Takuma's surprise we he found his lover's neck so sensitive. For now, he can thinks it's only because of his caresses, but maybe that could be a reason for future angst *expects that so, so much :-)* And Takuma being the one leading the action, m...This boy seems to have learned a lot since Trust Me *winks at him in ecouragement*

Yeah, I too portray Shiki as someone with depressive and self-destructive traits. He's lucky to have found someone so goodhearted and caring as Takuma.

"But Senri didn't know how to be any better, no matter how much he wanted to." Great sentence, it resumed very well his worries. Maybe because Shiki has idealized Takuma. Loved that sexy vampire scene with the nails and the blood sucking, I imagine vampiric sex more or less that way, too *rewinds the scene feeling her dark little heart melting*

Oh, please, bite one another and stop thinking too much about it! *but nods in comprehension* "his bite that Takuma remembered, not... not someone else's". That was jealousy?

The love confession was dark too. I'm not sure if Shiki really loves Takuma, in all its meaning, or if he desperately wants it to be love. That would be a fake feeling. Poor kid, he's so confused that I'm afraid he will hurt Takuma if he has said that on an impulse.

*laughs* I loved Takuma stumbling with his pants, all surprised. I'm sure he expected tender embraces and kisses at the light of the candles after a confession like that *giggles*

*sighs* They're so beautiful when they're laughing happyly together like that!!

Nice chapter, Vani, as always! I'm just waiting for all the angst and misunderstanding I'm sure it will follow *evil grin*.

Hugs,

Vane