Wow. I never knew you continued this past the prologue. THIS IS REALLY COOL! First off? The Marco/Shriler/Morgan relationship is cool. It has a lot of parallels to the Luke/Mara Jade Romance, intentional or un. And even though the Shriler/Morgan character is leaning towards becoming a bland and depthless, she's still really cool. The slow underlying plot line is intriguing as is the subplot back on earth. Spelling and mechanics are fine. There are a few grammatical errors, but they don't subtract from the enjoyment of the fic. All in all, a great fic. 4*/5*

Hello!Can ya finsh this Kyra? please i want to find out what happens to izzy! and ya know something i relized when i was chating with Aqua last night This was the first Fanfic i ever read! neat hu well i really want you to finsh this "and if you could "cough"Readsomeofmyfics"cough"? well tnt

oooh awesome! MORE! MUST HAVE MORE!

you really need to continue.

I really liked this story. It's great!

Oh-no! Marco! No,I will not let those nasty yeerks(or as the French say,"Yirks"...really! I'm reading an Animorph book in French.*everyone stares at her*leave me alone!)or other alien dudes(I don't feel like scrolling up to check how to spell the names)get you! I'll protect you! How...I'm not sure yet...but I will! Really!*everyone stares at her again*Okie...uh,well, still haven't answered me about that manager thing.I could make us...er,YOU,yeah,that's it...RICH! Call at least review me(I'm desperate)' -bye.P.S.10:)

Oh! Suspence! I love it!

Cool! More...please? That was exellent! Totally cool! More? Please?

:APPLAUDS:::

Ahh. A peaceful Yeerk trapped on a lonely planet with Marco. The excitement! ;)

GGRRREEAAATTTTTTTTTT!

That was great! Hey, how about having a little romance between them, huh? That would be so cute! Honestly! Great fic!

Inticing, I'll give you that, thou I was never one for previews that are supposed to draw out suspense.

YEs write the story! write the story!

Doesn't make much sense. But it intrested me, really.