OH MY GOD! That was so good! I never really thought about it before, but Karim's totally the Celtic Guardian! And it really makes sense that Pegasus would be the reincarnation of Akunadin... Now I feel really stupid for not realizing that before... But this was really, great, just like the Mahad one! You should continue it!

Why has nobody reviewed this? This is good. There's a lot if discrepency about who Shada and Karim were reincarnated as, the most common guesses being Shadi and Odion/Rishid, but I do like your interpretation of Karim as Celtic Guardian. It certainly makes sense, with so many of Yami's protectors surrounding him in his new life.

I also like how you portray Pegasus, because he really does do the wrong things for the right reasons. It's why he's a temporary bad guy. It might have been nice if Mahad had been recognized if he saw all the others, or maybe even if Mahad was only half-completed. That would have been interesting. Especially if you continue. Celtic Guardian gets killed a lot, so his perspective on duels would be interesting. Or maybe if he watched Pegasus in his daily life. There are more similarities between Ahknadin and Pegasus than we usually realize; feel free to explore that. -LostOzian