You know i would never have thought of mixing the Endless and the Avengers in a story but you did fantastically well. I love it.

This story was beautifully written. I almost cried like 4 times. It was very beautiful and elegant and you should consider taking up writing professionally if you haven't already, or if you're not alreay doing it. This was truly and amazing movie.

This made me cry. Thank you for writing.

That was so beautiful. I was bawling by the end, but it was good. I love this!

Your story actually made me cry. It was so beautiful, yet sad at the same time. I loved it. The ending was nice.

so sad but so beautiful...great job

I almost started crying when Cap said "He didn't deserve this." I love the way you picture death as being a punk-goth girl instead of a creepy skeleton with a black hodie.

Bloody sodden buggerish hells! If the mods would allow me to swear in American English in reviews there would undoubtedly be a line of expletives showing my adorning response to this piece of...well I don't know. All I do know is that this is what witting of any sort should be like. Or what even published works becomes when they stand up and grow a pair.

The story was brilliant on so many levels not only the sheer quality of said witting and the fact that it was both so very sad and heartbreaking and well that would be three things if I went on. All would be saying the fact that if a reader doesn't fell emotion at this they must be dead because so many emotions where felt. Fear, pain rage, and above all overwhelming sadness. Not the kind that's sappy the kind that makes a person want to weep with all the feelings that are so very primal and base.

Well done. Really well done, no other story even one that's professionally published has ever been like this. And I don't think many ever will.

you made me cry so hard! very touching and very dark,... thank you.