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Taryn Streambattle
2009-08-15 . chapter 4
Cute! Peterkins is adorable!
Siriusly Loopy
2009-03-16 . chapter 4
That was a nice little break from all the angstiness!! Very sweet!! =D
The Owl's Pen
2009-03-05 . chapter 4
COOL!
Nixie002
2009-02-08 . chapter 4
Just darling! Haha I really liked the verses! =] Peterkins is so amusing. Great job! ^-^
Lu Su
2009-02-06 . chapter 4
I loved this story, and the last part was absolutely amazing!
Wonderful job!

~the Valiant
Wildfire2
2009-01-29 . chapter 4
I think I read this one before.. not sure. I'll have to read the story you said goes with it as I think I'm missing much. Still very good.
Wildfire
LunaNigra
2009-01-27 . chapter 4
It's beautiful!
Loved it Luna
Bundibird
2009-01-15 . chapter 4
That was great. I really enjoyed this little story. One question though - what does Wassail mean??

Love Bundi
Bundibird
2009-01-15 . chapter 3
haha, loved the "My human is taller than yours!" "Meh. Ours are prettier." That was hilarious.

I'm so loving this story.
Bundibird
2009-01-15 . chapter 1
Hehehe! I laughed my way through this. This was wonderful!
downbythebay
2009-01-12 . chapter 4
Simply the most intelligent and enthralling Narnia story I have read to date. You obviously have no problem fostering verisimilitude within Lewis’s made-up world. I’m quite tempted at this point to hide in my closet and run into mirrors trying to get there! Not to mention my sudden craving for wassail. Where’s Aslan when you need him?
SpangleyPony
2009-01-05 . chapter 4
A great ending to this story I laughed all the way through. One of your best and a great tradition idea. Oreius's line about having being knighted was my fave seconded by Ed's wake up call...poor Ed hehe. Keep writing.
AnnCann
2009-01-02 . chapter 4
Elecktrum,
Great story, funny, creative, great songs, and funny original work. This is the kind of stuff I wish C.S. Lewis had put into his works. You really bring Narnia alive. All the fun details with the characters and what it is really like to live in Narnia for them day to day. Keep it coming!
Westel
2008-12-30 . chapter 4
What glorious revelry! So easy to enter in and just experience the joy of the season. The pageantry, formality and splendor coupled with fun, good company and affection was a perfect blend for the revived tradition. The wassail song you wove in was great - I couldn't just read the words; I had to sing them!!

And though he couldn't be seen, I have the feeling that Aslan was right there among us all.

Thanks for a wonderful Yuletide story!
FyreFlyte
2008-12-28 . chapter 4
I love the verses that you came up with! That must have been somewhat hard to do, especially since you had a song in mind that you wanted to fit it to. :)

I particularly enjoyed Peter attempting to wake up Edmund. It was so sweet...and brought out that lovely, growling, sleepy-headed lion in his little brother...and I love that so much. ;)

This was a wonderful way to end the story, and a wonderful way to sort of "end" the holiday season. I look forward to more from your truly amazing imagination...particularly /Were It Not For You/, which I noticed was added to your list. The title is quite intriguing. ;D

Keep writing!

FyreFlyte
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