AMAZING! Beautifully written, and touching. Love love love it. Seriously nearly made me cry, which is a lot for me.

my god... absolutely heartbreakingly lovely, I just can't think of what to say. I think maybe your section about the sparrows who always run from Mark, that kind of encapsultes there whole relationship, and my god I want to cry now.

This was incredible! I'm not a huge M/R fan (I'm really picky about the ones I like), but this was... gah, I loved it! The poetry in between didn't interrupt the flow of the story, which I liked even more because of how it was told - little snapshots of the most significant parts of the end of Roger's life. I also liked how, because Roger was blind, everything was in his head, in addition to being from his P.O.V.

Loved it!

*faves*

- Elyse

this is really really really really really good, even though it was a bit confusing at some points. I reall liked it!