Very cute chapter. Keep updating, I know it can be hard but just keep on trucking.

Man that was good.

Can't wait for more

WHAT? Right about what? I read this chapter, all right, but I have no idea what you're up to! WHY AM I SO OUT OF THE LOOP? AH!

There, I'm reviewing. I already read this chapter. It is good. Hot wet shirtless German man. You're welcome.

I liked this chapter!

Are you going to do the crazy thing and make her his actual blood child?

Cause I think that's be pretty cool.

OMG. I would be so impressed if I hadn't read this already. Although, the similarities between you and House never cease to amaze me.

Cute and funny all at the same time.

You better update!

Happy Holidays

awesome story. just wondering, but what does Audrey look like?

this is really interesting! cant wait to read more!

I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Teeheehee. I love it. I was a little uneasy to read it because most of the "authors" on here are people just entering puberty. They also have this misguided notion they can write a decent story. I do however apologize to you if you are a teenybopper. In that case you must be very mature for your age, and is great at writing. Ok back to the story.

You captured Dr. House's hostility/wit/whatever very well. Good job :). Although the concept isnt that original, you still give it that extra oomph or je nai se que to it. I'm not french so work with me here. But yes, update soon and I shall put you on alert. I have an account but I'm not logged in nor am I an author :D.

Good start for a fic. I'm going to wait for another chapter or two, before giving any feedback. I await your next update.

cool

dude this is soo well written i could picture it happening all in my head. its awesome!