Heh. "Talking" should be in quotes in the last line. Simply because that'd make it funnier. ^^
Anyway, well-written. It is short, so there is a rushed feeling to it, but I like the idea that Honda hits on Shizuka to rile up Jou. A bit of a a twisted triangle (add Mai and Shizuka dating and there's another huge complication to play with) but fun stuff.

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Very funny. Although I don't root for this pairing, your fic was definitely well-written and cutely funny.
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Good luck~!