This is really good, Atta Rosalocka! The characters as young ones are very creative. One thing that would be a good plot twist is if, later in the story, Atta and Flik start to get on really well until one of his inventions (or something else) messes everything up, and she and almost everyone else now thinks even worse of him.

Great story anyway. You're my inspiration for starting A Bug's Life Fanfictions!

Just keeps getting better can't wait for the next update.

Honcho

innocence,insanity and love all in one

Good job on this chapter keep up the good work.

Awsome chapter this story gets better every chapter can't wait for the next update.

Keep up the great work.

Honcho

This is such a great story! I love how you made the Bug's Life characters little kids! :) Anyways, please continue!

Wow what a beginning to a story, you sure know how to write interesting stories by far I can't wait to see what happens next.

Keep up the great work!

Honcho

This is good one of my favorite movies. I like how you made them little kids can't wait to read more.

Good chapter keep up the good work.

Good work! please update soon.

very cute

very cute lets continue