aw! i really do love this story! please update asap! i want them to finally get it on! Like donkey kong! haha

They're just the cutest thing aren't they? ^^

Oh! I was giddy like a schoolgirl when I saw a new update was posted, and with good reason! :)

So, we're at December 20th now - getting closer to Christmas. What jumped out at me was Cameron's reasoning for celebrating Christmas and Cameron's reasoning for killing Enrique. Especially with Enrique, the show left that slightly open to interpretation to the fans on why Cameron was motivated to step in and shoot him. But your explanation plays perfectly into the storyline. I love when an writer can seamlessly work in the show's plot to fit to their story. It just puts more quality into the story.

Thank you very much for the update. I can't wait for more! I still think you can work in five more days (or how many more until 'the end') before it's winter time here! :)

Awesome update and thanks again.

I thoroughly enjoyed myself with this story until 2am last night. :) The story is a great mixture of angst, humor, and romance. The conversations held between Cameron and Sarah are wonderful. I can fully believe that Cameron feels deeply for Sarah but has been hiding it behind her "terminator mask" for some time.

In Chapter 7, I especially liked the ending (besides just the hot kiss!) how Sarah asks who cares about her vitals not being normal and Cameron's response "I care" surely says a great deal. There are many small yet moving lines such as this throughout the story. Very well done!

Thank you for a great story, and I look forward to more.

lol!! loved it! cameron is really cute and with the rambling and all...

Very nice.
Obviously some grammer issues, some slight some glaring, but we've covered that already.
Otherwise it was a pretty good chapter, perhaps a little long in the first part, but still good.
I look forward to their da-er...meeting.

Makokam out.

lol cameron burnt the pancakes daydreaming. oh that's good.

aww! so cute! please update asap!

hey, i love this story. i really hope you update soon! keep up the good work!

Woo long time no read ^^ hope the updates are going to come more often ;)

Fun little chapter. I'm really looking forawrd to the next chapter now.
You might want to proofread a little more next time though, there were some pretty substantial mistakes.


Makokam out.

aw...omg how adorable and awesome! the way you wrote that was perfect...i LOVED it!

Love the talk between John and Cameron. You do great work in describing a scene and the mood while keeping the story flowing smoothly.

Can't wait for more!

Wispr

A very moving and powerful chapter. Good job!

Wispr

Boy talk about an emotional roller coaster ride of an relationship! Good work.

Wispr