 Goldeneye Rogue Agent 2009-04-18 . chapter 5you need to continue this fanfic NOW! right now! MOVE!! MOVE!! MOVE!! HOP TO IT! if i was M that would be an order! |
 AdaYuki 2009-04-14 . chapter 4I loved your story! Please update again soon! |
 piratejester 2009-04-12 . chapter 5I like it. James seems mildly ooc for Craig's Bond but oddly enough, not really out of the ordinary as much for a more Brosnan-y Bond... and it's cute. And Adrianna isn't unbearably Mary Sue or anything, and you should continue. Interesting...
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 piratejester 2009-04-12 . chapter 4He is out of character...but it's adorable. :D |
 piratejester 2009-04-12 . chapter 1I like this. :) |
 moon shadow 31 2009-04-04 . chapter 5I like the way the story is going. Can't wait to figure out their relationship. |
 cascade-of-black-ink 2009-04-03 . chapter 5Heh, no worries, I haven't either. XD Life just gets in the way sometimes. Anyway, I think there's no need for a rewrite... the attack scene was quite awesome. Perhaps you could explain the 'fanaticsm' that drove the guy to commit suicide rather than give up the information... it could add a new layer to your story. Can't wait to read the next chappie! ^^ |
 cascade-of-black-ink 2008-12-16 . chapter 4Oh, ah well, every dog has his day, and every man has his PMS day (lol!). This chapter is VERY entertaining, and yes, a bit of history on Tuscany would be nice! Haha... seriously, you're doing a really good job with the story. In some ways, Adrianna's haughtiness was a bit reminiscent of Vesper. Can't wait to read more, as always. :) |
 tiloola 2008-12-14 . chapter 1effing brilliant! I heart. Is this after Quantum of Solice then? But srsly this is effing amazing! I love your writing style, it's excelent, loves it |
 cascade-of-black-ink 2008-12-13 . chapter 3Woah, if you call this short, then I don't want to know what you consider long. Argh! I always hate those security breach moments! But I sense an exhilarating escape scene coming up! :) Can't wait to read that one! |
 cascade-of-black-ink 2008-12-09 . chapter 2Haha... a very amusing and funny chapter. I say that the amount of humour in here is enough to make up for the seriousness of Quantum of Solace :P There's sure to be trouble later in the office, and I can't wait for it. Hoo yah, another Bond girl. It would be too bad if Bond had to choose. XD Sorry, I'm a bit off my rocker today. Do continue! |
 liljimmyurine 2008-12-09 . chapter 2Eh. James seemed a bit... silly in this chapter. But I liked it. oh, and by the way, insane stunts can be VERY mary-sueish if you're not careful. Looking forward to more, but I want more of the Hellblazer fic you wrote, Sinfully yours, too. |
 LadyDiTech 2008-12-08 . chapter 1Bravo..well done, the story has pulled me in and I can't wait for the next chapter. You've done a great job with the banter between the agents. Bond's amusing/sarcastic comments with Adrianna are perfect and true to the Bond of Casino Royale and QOS! |
 cascade-of-black-ink 2008-12-08 . chapter 1Good start you have here! The beginning was intriguing - was it set before or after the story? But never mind, we'll figure it out as we go along, won't we? And is she related to Dominic Greene, sharing the last surname and all? Do update. :) |
 liljimmyurine 2008-12-07 . chapter 1This looks like it'll be very interesting. As long as it stays away from Mary-sue, it's a great premise, and there's some great witty banter in there. I think you could have added a bit about the embassy scene from Casino in there, but it's good. Looking forward to more |