Oh Judai xD Only you would do that.
Awesome story flow and I adore how well the story worked out.

I love it, and it just seems to flow so nicely together with the characters, the events happening..

I wish I had such a gift for writing.. I'm glad that you're willing to show your work to us ^_^

This is what an OC really should be. Not stealing the story spotlight, but being a true *part* of the story. Juudai did exactly what Juudai has done since he grew up...help other people.