Nice part. I love the way Lois connected the dots in nothing flat.
Looking forward to more.

Sweet chapter!

Recently found this site and have enjoyed several of the stories. This chapter was well written and paced. It flowed well and kept the reader interested. The developments and plot points were not rushed which added to the overall enjoyment. Like this story very much so far will continue to check for updates. Thanks.

Awesome story update soon.

AMAZING! I AM LOVING THIS STORY! I loved the big reveal and hopefully Clark will clear up the fact that he is NOT with Lana again and he's open for a relationship with her. ;) :) I loved how he told her that he's an 'intergalactic traveler', "He and I came from the same planet." I knew she was going to say something about shape-shifiting. I'm hoping that when they find Chloe and get Brainiac out of her that Chloe and Jimmy can find out about Clark again/for the first time. I CAN NOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! LONG LIVE CLOIS! PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON! :) :)

It was funny to see Lois completely misunderstanding Clark's intentions. And I liked the final:

“You’re the red and blue blur!”

This sounds interesting, can't wait for the next chapter.


But why on Earth did Clark hang up on Lois?

Nice start. Held my interest enough that I added it to my alerts. Looking forward to more.

I LOVE WHERE YOU ARE GOING WITH THIS STORY! KEEP IT UP! IT SUCKS THAT THERE WILL BE NO LOIS TILL FEB,09. SHE IS THE ONLY FEMALE CHARACTER I LIKE!