This story is amazingly written! The characters even through traumatic events seemed to stay in character which is bloody wicked. keep up the good work and please update soon!

please update soon

this is amazing. i could actually see this on tv as one of the episodes.

This story is SO good. Seriously, I've read and re-read it 3 times just today, because I can't wait for the next chapter. I usually don't like reading stories where Olivia is the victim because they all seem so... fake? Not many people can write her reaction believably, but you did an awesome job. Can't wait for the next chappie!

This was a great chapter, I look forward to more!

Aw, finally a breakthrough! Yay! Can't wait to read more.
Hai

WOW! I'm so glad to see that Liv talked to Elliot! I can't wait to read more of this great story! You are a great writer! I love this story!
E&O forever!
SVU forever!

More sappy goodness. I LOVED it of course! I kept checking my email waiting for an update! LOL. Glad you've finally been able to. :)

Aw... I'm so glad they talked! And I'm really glad that Liv makes sure she doesn't resent El for not being there, or for forcing her to be sedated, or anything else. I know he must have really been beating himself up about all that... Thanks for the update!

it was great. thanks for the update.

Awesome chapter.
Can't wait for more!

Excellent chap! I was nearly in tears myself by the end. Great job!!
Hai Letto

Great chap! Very angsty. You did a good job of showing us how hard it is not only for Olivia, but for El, too.

If you don't mind me making a critique, I have a suggestion for your sedation scene. It's not likely that the nurses would have injected her in the stomach. The skin and muscle there aren't thick enough. It is more likely they would go for her upper arm or thigh because they have more muscle and fat to absorb the sedative. Even more likely would be that they would have her on an IV. If she hadn't been eating, she would be dehydrated so they would have fluids running and they could inject the sedation directly into the port on the IV and have it go straight into her bloodstream. It's a picky little thing, but I'm the daughter of a nurse and a future doctor (Hopefully!), so I'm a little nuts about accuracy. Haha.

Can't wait to read more!
Hai

WOW! Where do I being? I love it! I don't care that it was short...though I think it was just right...maybe a tad bit longer next time. :) I love this story! I love the last part where Elliot came to Olivia's apartment and way they were! You are an amazing writer! I can't wait to read more of this awesome story! Please oh please keep going!
E&O forever!
SVU forever!

Oh my gosh! First of all, I have to say that I LOVE that song! It is one of my new favorites, and has actually been stuck in my head all day because I was listening to it on the way to work this morning. :) So kudos for that! And I am so glad you are giving us an insight into how they're working things out. Despite what Liv thinks about time only making things worse, I think she'd be right to tell El everything, just as he ought to tell her how he feels. You're doing a great job, and I look forward to more!