I liked it a lot, i've never read from Emily's POV. I love how you did it

I liked this a lot. :D You portrayed Emily - and everybody, really; I loved Alice in this - very well, and... yeah. Great job!

thanks for writing this its beena pain trying to find fanfics with the pack's reactions to nessie. well written, entertaining, thanks please write more :D

this was too tense. if you had a little more humor in it it might be better, but i think it could use some renovating, plus the name doesn't make any sense

that was awesome :)
seriously, you captured all the right emotions and it was good to see the story from Emily's POV.
very well done.

That was really good! Awersomely good! You've done Emily's POV really well.

Now, thank you for dedicating it to me. That's just brightened up my day. I'll get onto that challenge soon, I promise.

10/10

~ Free To Imagine

They knew were there even before we did. On Cullen land.

lol courtney, lol.

lmao. i like the whole dinner description that was nice. i really like your twilight writing style btw it flows off the page.

poetic and pretty.


It's kinda long, so I'll read it later.

but from what I read, its epic win :]


with love,
mio