This is absolutely beautiful. I loved the imagery and the careful detail you put in this story. I can imagine Logan doing exactly everything you described, and 'Ro being there with him. Fantastic job!

Wow... This was totally unexpected, by reading the summary i was guessing some hystrical, Logan acting all funny but this.. Was so much better. Such a awesome suprise, yeah...

You definitely need to travel more, cus damn this was simply fantastic and I just loved it all. Logan running to find Ororo standing there, waiting.. << LOVES!

Sweet and lovely! I love this little fic. Very well done. Loved him "seeing things."

This was a grate Chapter. I think you got them perfect

I really enjoyed your story. There were very little mistakes and the vocabulary was really nice. I liked that although the story is a romance, it's more about Logan's conflict with himself. Anyway, thumbs up.

That was very well written. I loved all the detail you put in and the emotions. You get a close feel of the characters. Great job!

I adored this story. I really wish that I could praise it more, but sometimes short and simple is better. Basically, I love the sophistication of your work-you detail every scene so that it creates this vast image of who's doing what and what they looked like. Although I'm much more of an OreO fan, I loved how you nailed Logan to a T and how you captured all that is Ororo without giving her a lot of lines. This is going on my favorites list! I hope to read more from you in the future.
-kendra

Can't log in wtb anyway at 1st I didn't know if I'd like this but I loved it! It's good 2 have u back now update it African story woman!

A beautiful love story for Christmas. Welcome back (again) Darlin'. :D

Kind of magical feel to this. Thumbs up.

Love the RoLo. This fit so well with them! Lovely Job!!