This story is absolutly AWESOME! PLEASE, please, please update soon!

I just found your story today and I have really enjoyed your characterizations and ideas thus far. I like the tension between Sarah and Jareth, even if Sarah is unwilling to do the math and get a clue, lol! It would seem that RL has been overly generous - it's been a while since the last update. I hope you find the time and inclination to come back to this.

another great chapter :)

More, please! xo

aww, now that's our Jareth 3

I enjoyed Hoggle's explaination of the Labyrinth as a place for lost things; I never thought of it like that before :)

I'm really liking your story!

/reads on

I remember reading this story a while ago and loving it. Just found it again and still love it. You've got to finish! And no, your charachters do not sound bi polar, I think you're doing fine. Missunderstandings and misscomminucations in love always frustrate and keep you walking on eggshells! I can't wait till Jareth and Sarah's final dance.

It's a pity you havn't updated this story in almost a year. It's quite good :)

This is a lovely story. I hope you get a chance to finish this someday. I eagerly await it's conclusion.

Oh please write more! I love this story so much so far; you just can't leave it hanging like this. :( *gives sad puppy dog eyes*

Loving the story please update soon

Ahh..can't wait to see what happens next..

The war was a little random, but I look forward to more j/S intereaction, and your story is going very very very loveily. Write more!

I...LOVE...IT! A unique plot with great twists! Can't always understand Sand though, but I usually get the idea! Jareth is so cute n' stupid! And Sarah well, Sarah's always cool.

WONDERFULLY WWRITTEN! I gives you A FIVE CRYSTAL REVIEWS! (Laughs at her own bad joke) Please write more. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter in this epic! YAY FOR YOU!

*gives cake with a chibi Jareth on it*

CHEERS!

Frosty

Very well written, they certainly come off as well rounded. I had hopped to see more of something develope between them but it's quite fair that you've taken your time. I hope you update soon.

Do you always end questions with periods? You do it several times in the first chapter, and at least twice in the second. (The first time Jareth speaks in the first chapter, I'm 99% positive that you mean to say "it" in stead of "is.")

I ADORE Narga's nicknames for Jareth-especially "peacock pants." Seeing someone who's more than ready to fly into Jareth promises for excitement and lots of amusement. How will Hoggle, self-declared coward, and Narga get along? If she takes that gruff tone with him, it's certain to cause sparks...or something, at least. (Though I realize that she'd probably know to be gentler.) Maybe have Hoggle wander in on Narga giving Jareth a piece of her mind?