I know u havent updated in a long time but i really love this story and hate the people that said it was too much like bellas twilight can u please update and i will get all my friends to read it and review alot please

Uh, I like this.. the idea and all. But
1. the wordings are too similiar to Twilight.
2. it didn't seem real.
[If she had time to say good bye, mom, dad, cynthia, I love you. Then why doesn't she have time to get out of the way] ?
o.o

Hm, I like the original story idea and all, but I suggest that you change up the wordings and etc. Everything seems way too simuluar to Twilight, and its really boring.

yay! i like it :)

lol awer it is ok that you took so long to write this chaptr it wwasn't really that long. But anyway this chapter was very good i liked and i even like how you changed some things from the movie so it wouldn't be exactly the same. Also, you did make a couple mistakes in your writing but there was like only three so that is ok because this is just a story for fans to read lol. But overall GREAT JOB!
Can't wait for the next chapter.

i love this as a jasper/alice fic! its so cute..

seems straight from the movie though..but nonetheless its good ^_^

That was interesting; I always like reading Twilight from the perspective of a different couple.

But - and no offence - that script was almost identical to the movie's. I don't know if that was what you were going for, but it made it sort of boring, since I've already seen the movie, making the material kind of old.

-Maggie

I love how its more like the movie-But it needs more detail more thought- More thoughts on how alice is thinking about the whole sitiuatiton with Alice-

Dominican Republic, Honduras, Puerto Rico, Cuba, Venezuela, Chile, Paraguay, Panama, Spain. There are so many answers for that question.

i like ur story so far. how many chapters do u plan to write?

i really like it!

It was a good chappy/

is alice gonna go shopping with angela and jessica to port angeles for prom dresses? because she likes shopping, unlike bella, so her trip to port angeles might be a bit different, wouldn't it?

haha i love this. i really wanted to know how that scene would play out if the characters were switched, and now i know lol :)

Keep it up!

Really good!

update soon!

sugar911