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Reviews for: Slipping Away
nysandar
2009-06-29 . chapter 4
so good story !! I luv it and hope for next chapters... Please update soon !!
Doctor Kiba
2009-06-16 . chapter 4
Oh, this is interesting. I really like it am I am definitely wondering what exactly is going on with Meryl. I adore this story so far and can't wait until you update it! Just lovely.
Luv4Uncas
2009-06-11 . chapter 4
Good story you have my full attention! That doctor is an evil scientist in disguise isn't he? Where is Knives when you need him! Update soon! Later!
One percent
2009-03-27 . chapter 3
I am impatient to read the rest! I love this mistery! and I have a feeling that the girls are going to meet big troubles! which I would like to see! XD
and I am also impatient to see vash and knives again (mostly the latter)!

Please, update this awesome story as soon as possible!
One percent
2009-03-27 . chapter 2
it's very misterious and addicting! well written too. I like the way you describe things and make the events happen. awesome job
One percent
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
when I read the last statement, I felt like saying:"really?!" and I felt stupid for it! for sure it will bring them way more than just extra pay (and somehow I doubt it will bring them any money!)

I love this story! even tho the pain Vash felt was too well described and made me sad for him (he's such a good boy after all) XD
jo
2009-02-07 . chapter 2
o, oh my god!? i am so confused as to what exactly happened. is meryl ok? was that the plant inside of the bulb? o, this sounds like it will be an awesome story, hope you update soon, ;D Peace!
Anon
2009-02-04 . chapter 2
Wow, exciting! I want to know what happens next...and, to understand what happened in the last chapter as well. Please keep writing!
goodbyelove18
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
Ah! So good! This story is so flippin interesting!! The chapter was the perfect length too!
goodbyelove18
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
This is really really interesting and good so far! Please continue soon!! I want to know what happens next!
Nightheart
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
Ah! what a great ending line. And cell phones? Yeah, that's all they need right? I liked Meryl's line about "this is so overtime" that's completly her alright. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Ajd262
2008-12-08 . chapter 1
Long time no see! I like it, Hope to see more.
XxBlaiddxX
2008-12-08 . chapter 1
Oh, I like it! Please update soon!
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