I like this; it's a very realistic take on how Sirius's disownment could have come about. Very well done.

Very good fic. Well written, felt like this is how it really happened. You should get a good grade on it, I think!

This story it's really good. I think it is the perfect way to picture Sirius' getaway.. and I found their speech very real... I think you're going to have a great grade :)

This was actually really good! I love your use of language, and speech. I felt like I was actually there and felt many emotions while reading this. I can actually believe that it happened like this and you did i justice. If I were your teacher, i'd give it an A.
And what class was this for? I would love to take it. lol