More Bevin please!!

sad and awesome it really good.

At first, I was skeptical...but I stand here correcting myself.

This is too real; and a lot of other people would have fumbled around, not you, no. Benji finally speaks. YAY.

aw, now Im starting to cry, that was sad... I hope you are going to post more.

continue this story please

i have to know what happens.please post chapter soon.you rock as a vwriter.

This is great chapter; I can't wait for the next one. Please don't abandon this story because it has some much potential and this site needs more bevin stories. I hope this story encourages you to continue this story & have a Happy New Year!

Wow, very intriging. Poor Ben and Kevin! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Well, it's a little short, but it's intriguing! The mystery around Ben (especially seen through Kevin's pov) pulls the reader in.

And that last line "I want you back Ben, I love you." is heart-breaking. Heart-breaking I tell you! Don't break Kevin's heart!

I like the introspective feel of the narration. Fits the situation.

This is so sad ;.;! What's wrong with Ben? Is Kevin going to make everything better? D: Now I'm worried XD

Ah! Benji what's wrong!? C'mon you can tell us, you can tell Kevin!! -sniffles- Oh, I wanna see what happens next, please oh please oh please oh pleaassee! DX

This is really good though, really draws in the reader leaving them wanting more...I'm proof. XDD

Please continue, I would really love to see what's wrong with poor Ben, and if anyone can help it's Kevin.

hey, I'd like to know why, too! Poor Kevin...knowing something's wrong but can't do anything!