WHA! POOR L!

Loved it!
i would like to see someone drag out Ls death abit more... its always so... looked over?

Like hear:

((“L? L! Please, open your eyes L!”

“Light, maybe it would be best if you weren’t here right now.”

Light heeded his fathers words, letting go of the rapidly growing cold body of L, and standing, heading to the door. He looked back, once, and shed one true tear. Light had upheld his promise to L, the detective dying in his arms; and with L, Light and his love, and any kindness in his heart, had died also, leaving only Kira and his dark desires))

This is all well and good, and i know you write this knowing everyone knows how L dies but... there should be more of a lead up...


If you don't understand what im raving on about PM me and I'll try to explain... im not good with words...

Dammit, the story made me cry... :'( My throat hurts. T-T Stupid Light, we all know where your gonna end up for killing L...! *Cries, then gets angry* Watch out for any dark hallways, Light, you never know if one of us L fangirls is hiding in it with a clever... *Snarl* >={

ToT L-CHAN!

first review. YAY!! I really liked this story. I loved Death Note, but never really got into fanfics for it. This one is an exception though. It was well written. It is going to my favs.

I cried. I cried long and I cried hard. The kind of crying that makes you heave trying to breath. Good job and trying to kill me Kira! *Shakes fist*

It was so sad. But really nice. I kinda wished I was Light and got to hold L, touch L and kiss him. *wipes away tear* stupid Light...