You can't get any better than this man you have go to keep going all the fans need you ( good use of the gears of war 2 diolauge)

Best fallout fanfic ever

I'm just glad u didn't have Burke kill the sheriff

OMG this is so cool I will read this then your gears of war story

First off, I would just like to say that it's sad how many times I've read the LW/Burke scenes in this fic. You just write him so wonderfully XD I especially liked the dialogue in Rivet City. I really hope you plan to finish it, cuz if you don't I think I'll exploud :(

wow! have been away a while and had a lot of this story to greet me and the last couple of chapters ive just read were really good and full of surprises as usual

all the best
TropicR

It's been a while, hasn't it, Fire? It's been so long... It's good to see some activity from you again. I fear that I seem to be having the same problem as our friend, MysticGohan88. I seemed to have trailed off from Fallout 3: The Avenger. I don't know when I'll update next. I do know that I will be re-writing chapter my current chapter. Not to worry. The adventures of Jason Lee will continue... some day. Once again, my priorities are a bit mixed right now. Anyway, I'll cut the chit-chat and get on with the review...
Okay, I'm actually surprised with this chapter. Alex has a lot of conflict within herself right now, and I'm left clueless as to what she'll do. James and Alex's conversation struck me the most, as now she is conflicted with her father and her own beliefs, plus the fact that he was now willing to sacrifice her. I kind of felt Alex might have let Burke off the hook a little hastily, but I'm sure more strain and conflict will develop in their ever-growing relationship. He seemed a bit... plain in this chapter. The fact she now has Fawkes with her is certainly going to make things more interesting. His presence might make things a bit more... difficult for her interactions with others. Hopefully, the Brotherhood won't shoot him on site. And is Alex actually considering helping Eden? What WILL be the shape of things to come? So many questions... Anyway, I hope this offered some encouragement. You're a talented author, Fire. All your numerous readers can agree to that.

-Mr. Wang

Addendum-
And it's belated (I fail at life) but, I would have liked to see Burke's reaction to finally seeing who -and what- the President of the Enclave really is. He may be a defector, but still, considering however many years he spent pledging his loyalty to something that wasn't even human... *that* has to hit like a punch in the gut.
Or... or maybe not?
This IS Burke, after all. Does anything surprise that man? >.>

Oh, here I was, reviewing chapter ten like it was going to be the last I'd see for a while, then lo and behold--chapter eleven was just waiting for me! I was so excited! And ANA! Holy cow, you put Ana in! That made me squeal like a little school girl at a Jonas Brothers concert. Thank YOU for putting her in your story, I like this BOS Ana idea!

So, for reviewing the chapter, the drama is so fiery! Patching and smashing relationships; adding twists and shockers; making the prediction for the ending ambiguous. You could write soap operas!

I think it's safe to call your story an epic. The chapters are so wonderfully long and detailed. I do enjoy the way you've manipulated the main story line, too, and added your own cool back stories and side stories... ah. Well, here's to hoping you won't keep us waiting on our toes until September!

Aw. c:
You're most welcome!
...You know one of these days I'm going to have to get off my rear and write some Fallout fanfiction, myes. Until that time...
MUST READ MOAR.

I wonder which direction this story will go now. If the fev works Fawkes will be dead and so will a lot of other people not just the Ghouls and Mutants.

Awesome job Fire! This was a great chapter of the enclave's base of operations!! I havent updated in ages simply cause, I havent been motivated and also my microsoft word isntworking. So, great job on the romance with Buerke, and also, did u get the last PM i sent u? Update soon. And contact me back!!

Very awesome chapter don't be to ** yourself about it ya know. Keep up good work and i eagerly await next chapter. In fact im going to poison a orphan everyday that ya dont update. And when ya do update.

Thank god! An update!

While I do appreciate the characters you place in the story (even if Burke seems quite OOC), I thought President Eden was disappointing. I believe he was too generous, releasing Alex, Dad, AND repairing sentient Pip-Boy for a really tentative deal. Plus, now we know Burke served in the Enclave, why does Eden not seem to mention him?

I also appreciate the Commonwealth nod you put in there. If you want your version of Burke inserted within the history of the region, just let me know.

All in all though, again, this story easily breaks the banality of all the stories that are coming out in this section, sadly.
Cheers,
Shin