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Reviews for: Falling Star
LightDarkandChaos
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
Oh... so what happened to Shadow in SA2 just happened to Sonic... But Sonic's unlikely to survive the fall... Great, but sad, story.
Shontiachaosmaster
2008-12-10 . chapter 1
u haven't deffiantly haven't lost ur talent feniiku! awesoem, as always! X3
Awdures
2008-12-09 . chapter 1
Nice ficlet. Effective repetition of the main idea.
Frozen Nitrogen
2008-12-08 . chapter 1
What is it with you and starting fics with weird starry occurances, Feniiku? :)

I enjoyed the discussion of Sonic's symbyosis with the chaos force that makes him Super. And a bit of Sonic Rush Adventure style 'the Emeralds have a mind of their own', as well.

And, there is, of course, the whole forgets-everything-else-and-is-focused-only-on-destruction PSYCHOTIC EVIL of Super Sonic to enjoy. :D

Could, I think, have done with more multisensory description. I think the only thing we have here describing sound is that the explosions were "loud". A bit of the ol' "Screaming winds rippling through brilliant golden fur" would not have gone amiss. ;)
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