I love this twist with the mpd...I think you write wonderful stories and I can't wait to read more of this one. Update soon and may your muses be with you...lol

thanks-deanne

great story

The tug of war between the different personalities in the last segment of this chapter was written well. From Orion to Harry to Boy, the distinctions you used led me not only to buy into the story, but actually envision Harry as literally physically different in his mannerisms and countenance. There were a few minor spelling errors along the way, but nothing to be worried about... And I just loved your last line. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I have a question. Since Harry is Jacob's pack-mate and Jacob belongs to a pack with Sam as the alpha, does that make Harry part of that pack as well? Is he going to be affected by Sam's authority as the alpha? Because I could see that causing some major problems when Sam finds out about Harry and his being with Edward. I'm guessing that if Harry is part of the pack via Jacob, then Sam wouldn't like the newest cub getting cozy with a vampire. And if Harry is subject to the alpha's authority, could Sam try to forbid Harry from seeing Edward?

good story please update soon

As this story progresses it becomes so breathtakingly beautiful that it brings tears to my eyes. *sigh* The MPD was a nice touch. Others have touched on how unstable Harry should be after all he's been through but I have yet to see it done quite like this. Well done. I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

wow amazing! I couldn't stop reading! i can't wait for the update!! this is very very interesting

Oh wow, this is a good story. I can't wait to read more of it. You know I'm pretty happy that Jacob get's along with everyone, or nearly everyone, here. Can't wait for the next update.

Hullo~! :3 I really like your story! I'm just wondering, is this before Bella, after Bella, or was there/or will there ever be a Bella?

Please and Thank You,
~Kera

And the plot thickens!!~ Can't wait to read more!!~

Amazing! Absolutely amazing! Love the way you're having the Cullens approach the MPD. Can't wait to read more. :)

oh man! that was a great update!
i'm so sad and frightened at the same time about Boy's appearance...
that last line was very scary, actually... out of all his personalities, it's true that only Harry and Boy have no guts to kill...

wah...

update soon please.
it's been so long since this fic was last updated... :D

Woah. I just spent the last few days reading this story and it is amazing. I mean I can't even describe it to you, but when I reached the end of this last chapter and saw that there wasn't any more I was like: No!! Anyway, you write everyone so well it's scary. Oh, and giving Harry MPD was very clever. Please update soon!

Please update soon. This is an amazing story and really sucks you in.

I love this story! At first I wasn't sure been then I thought what the hell we'll see and I'm so glad it did. I hope you decide to update this soon! Eagerly awaiting more!