Poor Marth...

Anyway, I think that this is really very good. You managed to bring the scene to life in this. While reading this, I found that I could easily envision the destruction of Altea (particularly the castle) and, more importantly, I could really feel for poor Marth as he tried to deal with his own feelings about what had happened.

Great work!

Aw! Poor Marth! ;_;

This was really well written; I really imagine it and understand how he felt...

Ouch... Poor guy.