What happened to Ryou?! Does he die?! I need to know!

Great story though!

I loved the suspence in this story, it was simply delicious! Very well put togeather with a brlliant cliffhanger-ish yet complete ending. I highly advise you to continue writing great little stories like this. I'll be reading them. :D

O_o Well that was scary. *shudder* Is it gonna eat him alive or something?

I really like this! You describe fear very,very realisticaly! Please, update this soon! :heart:

what happenend did ryou die? im confused the story was good though

Wholly...cheescake...

This was a really good fic. ^^ I really like how you wrote it without ever naming the main characters, I always like fics like that.
But yup, awesome job! ^^

Dang that was creepy. Ryou should start walking around with a flashlight or something.

My goodness, this is an amazing fic. Very creepy. Not quite on par with horror, but definitely suspenseful. You write wonderfully; I felt like I was running with him. The fear is very real. I think I had shivers run down my sides towards the end there... and that NEVER happens. This was a powerful oneshot, and I enjoyed it immensely. Well done!

I frickin' love this story. Frickin' love. Though the italic its were annoying, the end more than made up for it.

Epically awesome.

Wow, desperate enough to be stay after school~ And he loses anyway...poor Ryou!! Still, needed my angst fix. thanks!

wow~!!
awesomeness~!!
Sorry... i"m just slightly incoherent right now~~
xD
Awesome stories tend to have that effect on me~
ask anyone else I reviewed for~
xDD

Holy crap! (Gasps in air) Suspense, much?! Oh my gosh...remind me to NEVER read another of your stories right before I go to bed!

Nah, I'm just kidding. That was awesome! I loved the ending a lot...Is the darkness gonna come get me, too? I'm still a little afraid of what's out there...

THAT IS SCARY! Niilan, you've proven your talents once again. That is terrifying. You manage the...horror aspect of it amazingly. Angst? DEFINITELY! I noticed a few errors (spelling, minor grammar) during the beginning, but after that I got way too into it and wasn't even paying attention to that. Especially that very last part where Ry got caught (so sad)! AH! This was thrilling. Amazing job!

As always, I hope to live up to your talent.

Ever a reviewer and friend,
Angel

Wow...interesting. You have very good words and I enjoyed reading this.