 sangoscourage 2009-12-23 . chapter 8Just found your story again. Very nice chapter. I hope you will keep up with it. |
 Death101- Fox Version 2009-10-19 . chapter 8Nicely done. I'm glad that Fluffy has no problem with her. Please update soon!
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 sangoscourage 2009-07-19 . chapter 7That was excellent. Sounds like you may have hit writer's block. (yech, I hate that):P Let's see if I can help you; that sounds like InuYasha to the rescue.
1. She wakes up in Kaede's hut with a few bandages on her from where Naraku held her. Worried about Rin, jumps over to her new friend.
2. Kagome scolds her for moving but Sakura just glares at her and pays attention to Rin as the girl wakes up; saying she (Sakura) is just fine.
3. Rin convinces Sakura to tell them all the story Sakura had told her about what had happened. They all gasped, Sango a little as she had guessed what was wrong with Sakura.
4. InuYasha has more respect for the little girl, after seeing how she had defeated Naraku, and hearing her story.
5. Kagome starts to cuddle and fuss over Sakura, being treated like a doll again. Sakura starts to yell at Kagome rudely, but Kaede reprimands her, and tells her to speak to Kagome politely.
6. Perhaps Sakura could go back to the future with Kagome (since she carries the shards), for a few hours.
Hope that helps and hope to see a new chapter up soon. If you need help, just let someone know. :). |
 Death101- Fox Version 2009-07-19 . chapter 7Shippo and the rest have to show up soon! Or Sesshomaru at least! Someone! Naraku can't win! Please update soon!
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 kagomes pup 2009-07-19 . chapter 7I would say it is time for fluffy to look for Rin and Kick some Naraku backside. kagome needs to wash two mouths out with soap Inuyasha and sakura. Will Ayame meet Sakura with her red hair and white fur? |
 kagomes pup 2009-06-01 . chapter 6Very good and I am looking for more soon. Whats Lord Fluffy going to say abought Rin runing away? |
 sangoscourage 2009-05-31 . chapter 6Very nice chapter! I'm guessing it's Sesshoumaru watching them. Guess I'll just have to wait won't I! ;) |
 Death101- Fox Version 2009-05-31 . chapter 6Aw, they are so cute. Awesome job! Please update soon!
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 Bella-Edward745 2009-05-30 . chapter 6 i love yor story plz make some more chapters plz |
 Death101- Fox Version 2009-04-15 . chapter 5Nicely done! I'm glad that she met Rin but sad that she feels that way about herself. Please update soon!
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 sangoscourage 2009-03-09 . chapter 4Woah, excellent!! I can almost see Sakura's eyes starting to go read, warning the three older demons to back off; and not liking having to tell them what she told Shippo.
Hope you update real soon. I'll be "chomping at the bit" so to speak. :D |
 Death101- Fox Version 2009-03-08 . chapter 4Go Shippo! Awesome job on this chapter! Please update soon!
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 kagomes pup 2009-01-21 . chapter 3Very good. Shippo is going to find himself on the wrong side of two wolfs. |
 sangoscourage 2009-01-19 . chapter 3Excellent! Looks like Sakura is making some good progress, especially with Kaede and Shippo. Hope the little girl will tell her story soon; it will help her heal emotionally. |
 Death101- Fox Version 2009-01-19 . chapter 3So cute. I think Sakura and Shippo would make a really cute couple. Awesome job! Please update soon!
-D101 |