Are you ever going to continue this? It's very good.

love it please continue the story please it is going great so far

I DEMAND that you update this story! ...please? It's really good so far, and I want to know what happens.

Wow, I'm impressed. This is very well written and I like the part of Kevin that you're touching with this. I was starting to think that I was the only one who was questioning the whole "mom and dad" thing. Keep up the good work.

Amazing job! I liked it, and I would love to see more. Just making sure, I assume this isn't a oneshot and that more chapters will come eventually. If I'm right, then I can't wait to see more.

this is cool finall weve got some new meat on the block it was sng to get a little starting to get kinda stale round here
dont reply to this message my email is being watched by my parents and im grounded for finals week so after then il get back to send you a pm

This is really good - hope to see more!

love it :)
awesome start, update soonly (Y)
reney xo

hey, love your quoting of 'blackbird' up the top, its one of my favorite beatle songs. cool story, hope to read more soon.

More! More! More!

Your idea of Kevin's past seems rather untouched. Heck, the whole subject is. But anyways, you need to continue this. It was really good.

Was the 'eleven' pun intentional?

OH MAN OH MAN OH MAN. I LOVE THAT SONG SO MUCH.

AND THIS STORY SOUNDS AWESOME SO FAR. I TOTALLY THOUGHT HIS MOM MUST BE DEAD TOO WHEN I WATCHED THIS EPISODE.

THIS IS AN EXCELLENT BEGINNING. MORE MORE MORE! :D

SEE HOW EXCITED I AM? I'M TYPING IN ALL CAPS.

HEHEHEHEHEHEE CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, YAHAHAHAHAHA