 AlyenaTheBandit 2009-04-02 . chapter 1This story is absolutely brilliant. It shows a totally different side of Tsuna that's violent and dark and unexpected, but nevertheless intriguing and intelligent. Gokudera not fawning all over Tsuna even after the kiss was also a nice surprise, and I think it added a lot to his character as well.
The whole thing from the Godfather perspective, with all the direct references to Michael and the restaurant, as well as Dino representing Sonny were well done and made it a much more interesting read. If you have any more of these up your sleeve, I would love to see them because this was fantastically written and well thought out.
And I could definitely see Tsuna failing at White Zinfandel. =]
Great work!
-Bandit |