*sniffs* Loved it! Simply loved it!

FAVORITES!

Hey! I was just going through the older fan fiction and read this! I love this story, and it's honestly one of the best here at ! I loved the use of the f-word to show how emotional ND is, not to mention the closeness of the brothers! You've got them down, don't you? Also, I loved the way ND perks up at the end, and just how you develop the story! And the song-it is incredible! Once again, loved it, and please write more soon!

Dev

Excellent story! Pefect setting and reactions, everything was so...real. It wasn't fake, but it was planned out like in real life. In real life I'm sure that your characters' reactions would be almost identical to a real life situation, this shows how perfect this story is. Don't stop writing! bYe

Ooooh! So much torturing of Nosedive... I like it! Well, you probably already knew that, but... Anyway, it's very well written, especially for writing it in such a short period of time. Can't wait to hear from you again!

excellent excellent story! really great! that is definelty one of the best stories that are

listed on this site. the author should definatly write more especially

with Nosedive and Wild WIng as the main characters they are excellent

and stunning!

I did not review this. I've read it like three times and I never reviewed it! SACRALIGE! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! Well, I'm reviewing it. Can I keep this? I like it a lot. Yes I do. Keep up the good work my friend. :)Yes, I am wired. Hee hee hee hee hee! Ooooooooh. Good schtuff! Me go now... Chameleon's screaming for attention again...

Ok...Orphan's going down the crapper cuz this is sooooo much better than it could ever be...why didn't I find this before?This was perfect. The emotions were perfect, the mood was perfect, the action was perfect, the humor was perfect (especially the eating Phil part!) What I'm trying to say is...this is too good for words. There are far too few Wing-hurt/Dive-react fics. I mean, i though i was on to something there! Guess not. Anyway, I should put this on my favorites list cuz this was by far one of the best fics I have ever read. And I am so serious!...Y'know, I think this review is long enough, so I'll just go...wait a sec! There's a *sequel*! Expect another long review there, too!

A very good story. I love nosedive stories. I especially like a story that deals anst to both bothers. Good job. I hope to see more of your work.

Very nice. There are a few tiny errors in there, but it'd take a long time to find 'em. Geez, and in under 24? Amazing...

Oo, under 24 hours I liked the story! Well written and all that jazz! ; Oh how I hate people like you sometimes. But I can't hate you because you're my friend, so ignore that ;;; Yeah... Enough incoherency for now!

A bit to much profanity, but a very good story otherwise.

*laughs* Oh, we all love to torture the guys" I liked it that it was Wildwing and not Nosedive like in my story 'Help'.(I just LOVE torturing cute 'lil Nosedive*evil laughter*). I didn't notice any grammatical errors, but I am German, so don't expect too much of me(it would be enough if I would notice MY grammatical errors*glances at Ottercub*"I'm sorry!") Ehm...what I wanted to say: LOVED IT!

A happy ended; how sweet. Great fic.

That was just Kawaii!

ehh.. I dont want to sign in... but this was a great! story I loved it! absolutely loved it!