|Reviews for A Slight Misunderstanding|
| mythicalprogrammer 12/10/08 . chapter 1
Err... the beginning was too much of a boring setup. It would be better if you had their actions do the story telling than Logan yapping. Like a flashback but then again I can see it can take a long time. The Akane and Ranma to university was a setup too you can always reveal the details later or give hint here and there like in Age of Titans by Ozzallos. Yeah, I can't say much about the story but those setups are badly executed but the benefit is you got rid of the tedious details and you don't have to explain it later on in the fiction I guess.
| MysteryLady-Tx 12/10/08 . chapter 1
interesting very very interesting, I liked it, oh man this is going to be very very different, hehehe, Happosai...man does he have some sort of radar...geez...poor Rouge...LOL
THANKS I can't wait to see where you will take this:"D
| Gangsta Spanksta 12/9/08 . chapter 1
You can write a decent chapter, though there are a few things you need to stop doing. First, know your audience, and don't explain to them what is common knowledge. Second, show don't tell, which is followed by third, know where your story truly beings. All three of those problems happen together at the beginning of your chapter. You tell us what we already know, then you explain a lot of things that you don't need to, instead of showing us the story. Your real story begins right after all of that. You could crop all of that out of your chapter, maybe replace it with one paragraph, and in effect it will be much more enjoyable to read. Don't get me wrong, you've got talent, you just really needed to get rid off some stuff.
| Transience 12/9/08 . chapter 1
Ahahaha! Most entertaining - Looking forwards to he next installment of it. The story has a lot of potential, I think, so I really hope you continue it )
| OBSERVER01 12/9/08 . chapter 1
pretty it up
| aznblackhowling 12/9/08 . chapter 1
Should be interesting to see a Ranma and Rogue pairing. Such Happosai mentioned D or greater, I'm guessing this is not the X-men Evolution universe?
If so, which X-men universe/timeline?
I look forward to your next update.
| Wonderbee31 12/9/08 . chapter 1
Interesting way to introduce Ranma and Rouge, and going to be curious to see what happens with the two of them, and then to see what happens if Ranma is convinced to retun to America with them.
| James Axelrad 12/9/08 . chapter 1
hey, i think you might have something interesting with this one.
my question is whether or not the technique was effective in anyway.
i hope you get another chapter of this one out.
| Dumbledork 12/9/08 . chapter 1
Well, this is different. I like it so far.
| dogbertcarroll 12/9/08 . chapter 1
Funny, but the ending sucked. When did she start draining people through clothes and why would she knock him out for attempting to block her powers that she didn't want in the first place?
| Elconquisador 12/9/08 . chapter 1
I've some of your other stories before, but I must say this one is pretty interesting. I'm impressed at the interation and dialogue between Ranma and Happosai. It feels like reading the manga or something. At first I thought this was going to be the clique X-men plot, but this looks pretty promising. Can't wait for next update.
| Tribun 12/9/08 . chapter 1
First things first: MORE!
-On which X-Men universe do you base this? Is it Evolution just some years later? (explaining why Rogue is now a grow-up woman)
-Shouldn't Rogue also know WHY Ranma did that, after such an intense drain? I speculate she does but wants to make it clear to him not to try that again, before tending to his new injuries.
-Now, that would be the kicker, but couldn't Rouge have duplicated Ranma's curse in the process of draining? Guess she'll get quite the scare...hehe.
| Edrik 12/9/08 . chapter 1
I was not going to read this fanfic, but I was bored. At first I thought..."oh no..this is going to be another one of those 'X-men show up and take Ranma to the mutant academy'" But so far this seems different than the VERY few X-men crossovers that I have read. This story is very well formatted and hardly any grammer mistakes (not counting the 'mah' from Rougue). I enjoyed the story so far and hopefully you will find the time to continue this unique fanfic.
| Sefirot 12/9/08 . chapter 1
I have read your previous work and I must say that this is as interesting as the others. Update soon please!
| TegwenielWestwind 12/9/08 . chapter 1
Could be interesting. I hope you have a good plot line or solid character development planned. I look forward to more.