This was great. I really liked it! Great job!

Realistic work.

Wow. I really really really liked this. I loved their dynamic and their...just, everything! It was intense and emotional and...amazing! Great job.

And I don't think it needs to have anything else added to it. I think it makes a fine one-shot.

Good god, that was creepily good. You managed, once again, to write Sasuke and Naruto IC to an obscenely formidable degree. You manage to preserve the best and most vital parts of their characters in the very creative situations you throw them in (...identical twins...never knowing...god, I never thought about that before but it makes me shudder now).

In Sasuke's point of view in Crossed Wires, you seamlessly melded Sasuke's somewhat clinical and rather blunt character aspects in the canon with his developing smug-bastardness (also canon) along the lines of his evolving AI: as brilliantly original as it was brilliantly in character. The manner of each sentence perfectly conveyed what a map of Sasuke's AI circuits would look and taste like. Here, with Naruto's perspective, you've blown me away again. With each sentence that flashes across Naruto's mind, there is just the right amount of thinking and lack there of; the impulsiveness of his character is perfectly preserved in his blunt, confused, heartfelt thought patterns, the habitual lack of deep thought tempered with perceptive gut feelings. And of course, the way Naruto and Sasuke interact. The perfectly IC manner of their interaction makes it more of a head-on collision; it is as epic as their collisions in Kishimoto's world (with slightly (-pleasingly-) altered gravitational factors and resulting fallout). Bravissimo.

One last thing.

"Bastard-Sasuke-ese"

...

Yes.

Wonderful story!
And really, really original.
Psychologue Sasuke? Lol that was nice ^^

just dropping you a heads-up that i've reviewed this story; you can find it at http immortalists(dot)livejournal(dot)com 8)

Perfect ending :) I loved it

Hey,

This was a little different story, and it was enjoyable as well as scary to read it, somehow. I really adore stories with angst in them and/or Hurt/Comfort as one of the genres – Tragedy and Horror as well. I’m not sure why, but it creates so much more emotions and feelings when you read stories with sad and/or tragic moments in them.

I’m pretty useless when it comes to leave constructive criticism or critique in any forms, do don’t expect anything :]

I love SasuNaru, and to see Sasuke as a complete bastard – as in an extremely MEAN and EVIL bastard – but at the same time h cares about his blonde, yeah, his, I know . . . it’s kind of cliché to say it like that, but it fits so well ;P Well, to the point! To se him like this makes me smile, because he cares; it’s the same in the anime and manga. He deeply cares about Naruto – he really CAN’T kill him, it’s pretty obvious by now – and it shows us how deep their friendship goes; in this case this story’s Sasuke’s and Naruto’s friendship. (A strange sentence, but what the heck! I think you get it anyway, you’re smart! xD)

The title of the story was something that caught my eye as well, and I’ve got to say, that you’ve hot gold; the tile is perfect for the content of this story, and to be honest with you . . . about 80% of the people here on FFN – authors and authoresses – have got titles that has nothing to do with the story itself, and the rest of the 20% are the people with fitting titles. To be someone of those 20% is really, really, really good ;P

Anyway! My point with this review is to say that I loved it and I’m jealous over your writing skills. I’m writing a SasuNaru story myself, but I can’t bring these kind of emotions and realistic scenes into it, so DAMN! I’m RE~ALLY jealous here. . . -_-”

Thank you for an awesome story! Kind of sad that it was so short though, but I’ll live ;P

~mi

I really liked this. It was interesting all the way through because Naruto's situation wasn't just told to use outright and completely at first; we got to figure it out for ourselves as the story went on. Slowly, the story's universe was mapped out with each new revelation, and it was a lot of fun. Your portrayal of both Naruto and Sasuke's characters was entrancing, and by that I mean it was unlike any other portrayal I had read of them, but it fit, felt right, and the story flowed with Naruto-to-Sasuke interaction that felt entirely believable.
So, basically, I really enjoyed reading this, I'm satisfied with how the one-shot ended, and I look forward to reading more of your fanfiction ^-^.

You just don't read this kind of thing at 2am while listening to leonard cohen. I really loved this, very worth the tear or two I shed for it.
It was great, really.

oh, wow. this is utterly beautiful. you kept them both perfectly in character for the world you've created, and their interaction was just so much fun. great, great job.

Woah! That was some hard-hitting shit. I wonder if you meant it to be? I love the way you wrote it by the way. It's like this massive conversation with little interjected parts of narration. It's awesome.
I love it ...

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Love it! It´s really funny (the good way of course) that Sasuke steals kisses of Naruto all the time! It´s just cute! And it is really orginal that Kyuubi is Minato´s twin brother and not Naruto´s big brother that it´s always in other fanfic´s.

It's quite funny to see Sasuke and Naruto both acting like... well guys I s'pose. I mean, them n their prides. Both are forces to be reckon'd with. And damn, he went through all that... Figures Sasuke would be indenial about him not caring. Che

Overall, I loved this. yes. Loved. It's so unique compared to other stories. And the way it was written. I would love to give you a round of applause, but I'm afraid that you may not be able to hear it

I really enjoyed this 'therapy session' between Naruto and Sasuke: I'm always a bit apprehensive about how the author will portray and develop their relationship, but again you've done quite an amazing job. While I was a bit confused (only a bit) about the actual incident (that happened to Naruto), it did not detract from my enjoyment.

Again, a good story.

QBC