Way too funny to be read in a police dispatch office! Your characters are absolutely on target!

LMAO! Oh this was good! So very very good! hahaha! Great work you did!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I laughed so hard! Poor Ironhide! now what about the Easter Bunny? Tooth Fairy? and all them good stuff?

Too cute! Makes me wish for the holidays already. C:

Hahaha! Ironhide is such a sucker XD

LMAO! That was priceless! I loved the moment where Ironhide realized he'd been fooled by Lennox. The Absolute Anger in his "Frag You" comment, combined with the obvious smugness of Lennox just sells the whole story.


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This was hysterical.
Both characters were written well and the premise beyond adorable without being cheesy

Frag you, and you, and you...
lol. I always thought Santa was evil. Now I have someone to compare notes with!
Awesome!

Poor 'Hide. XD

now this is a funny story. sad part is, you can really see ironhide acting that way too!

ROFL WAFFLE WAFFLE WAFFLE! that's so FUNNY! gotta be one of the funniest fics i've EVER read! but mind you, you're competeing with Manaphy and her story, 'Shortest Twilight Fan Fic Ever!'. or something like that. but still! this is REALLY well written! they should so put this in the second movie, or maybe the third if there's one. call Hollywood! i bet you they'll say yes!
no, seriously, a challenge can be chosen by the winner, any challenge, and the loser will have to write it in a way far out of their style. do you accept?

-evil laugh-

Man, poor Ironhide... -snickers-

Okay, Will offically rocks...

... Maybe he can help Sideswipe with Pranks from now on... XD

Bahaha, made my day. Love it. XD *sulks* You ruined my bad mood just when I was on a roll. ;P Haha, keep it up.

Wonderful. Just... wonderful. Thanks for sharing. /sneaks off to giggle in a corner/

Oh GOD! This is the BEST Christmas fic EVER! I do believe it even beats my christmas chapter in Down by The Bay! *Dies lauging, mainly because Ironhide has a thing about people mocking him* *Is reserected* Another great fic, I'm glad your still posting here, cause I'm STILL having a problem with my computer, thanks for sharing this fic.