keep it up !
your chapters are becoming cooler and cooler
sad that the 2 friends died and poor rita
vyse is a rly complicated person

as always cool
but why do their decks remind me of ko's and white's zero/cross decks ? XD
anyway cant wait to see whats next
P.S : i wonder if zakira and the team will appear in the next chapters :S

Wow... poor Vyse. But still, great chapter!

So thats how the tiger came about xD

Lol. Yeah they should put more gore into DM xD Not that it will appeal to the little kids. But great chapter anyway.

Wow. I love how you show the forming of Zakira's group. Really great idea indeed! ^^

Nice chappie :D

poor vyse
carlos rly pwnd him
loved the duel

OMFG COOL SCENE
I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
P.S : is this first season ognna end after the next chapter ?

cool Christmas scene
merry Christmas :)
sadly i dont know if i can make one for my fanfic since mine is a pure adventure wich cant beintrerrupted by 'special' scenes :(

cool duel
alphadios deck vs light MUAHAHAH lol XD
liked this chapter more :P
also i agree they should've put bleeding in DM

cool chapter
and YAY FOR LORDI SONGS
even tohugh The Children of the Night is my fav Lordi song My Heaven Is Your Hell aint bad at all
also do you have an youtube account ?
if yes then have you watched my videos ? my account is acumashindorballomu :P

cool chapter
i rly enjoyed it and ofc i liked chappy's deck but IT RLY NEEDS BALLOM IN IT XD lol
also im getting my next chapter ready soon BUT it will have some yaoi in it cos my friend is a girl and a yaoi fan -.- hope you dont mind
its just a little scene not too much so dont worry

cool story man
i really like dit and YAY someone gives attention to Toto :)
cant wait for the next chapter

at least now i understand why zakira is turning everyone to stones :P good idea but you should work on your spelling, try getting a beta :D