Gosh, your fic was brilliant. It had just the right amount of emotions, narrative, extremely read-able, and descriptive. I'm so glad I read this. This fic was the kind writing I wanted to write but didn't know if I could cross over to prose piece. That's the kind of feeling I got when I read this anyway. Great job!

OMG!You have have to update this. It was so aewsome. I was so mad at first when I thought it was only a dream, but when they both were having the same dream that makes up for it. Such a great job for your first Smallville fic. Awesome. Your writing really is beautiful.Update soon.

Aw, that was too good! You wrote Davis and Chloe perfectly, and I loved that you used those great scenes from the show. I really wish it wasn't a dream, and that it really happened; at least in this fic if not on the show... oh, well. I'll pretend it did! hehe Great job! :D coughcoughsequel*

That was smexy. Thanks for writing it.

i love this story

Really great story. I love how u incorporated dialouge from the show. nice cliffie. r u gonna update?

Wow, that was so beautifully written! I loved it! :)

really gr8!

I really enjoyed this story and the peek inside Davis' head that you provided. I look forward to reading more of your work.

i love this story

I really hope this isn't just a one shot. Great job. Please continue.

That was a beautifully passionate dream that I wish had actually happened on the show!

Chlavis are very hot together, but I don't think it's all lust driven either. Thet=y care deeply for each other and I wish there was a way for Davis to be seperate from Doomsday. Chloe deserves to have a hot and sexy man in love with her, and Jimmy is not that man.

Will there be more to this fic?

Wow I really hope you add more to this. I was so sad when it was all a dream but glad because I wouldnt want Chloe to have the guilt of cheating on her mind

chloe has got to pick davis.. they are so hot together!!