It's really sweet. Try writing another chapter from Edwards POV?

duuuuuuude i never read any twilight fanfiction before but i was entirely expecting it all to be shitty fangirl rubbish

i read this and i was pleasantly surprised, your a really good writer and and i hope when i click on your profile there is lots more stories for me to enjoy :)

ah, that was adorable. so fun to read that scene again, and especially from edward's perspective. nice job!

wow that was a really good chapter through edwards eyes! i think it was amazing! it was a milion times better then others that i have read. you kept true to edwards personality and that it was made it so good! great job :D

I like it!

Thank you!

I love Edward's POV :)

i don't usually review but when i do i really mean it so i just want to say that this story was amazing and i think you portrayed edward perfectly

You did a good job with this - it's one of my favorite chapters of the book :P

You are very talented and I've read a lot of your work -

thanks for sharing your work :)

whoaa i absolutely LOVE this! probably one of the best edward POV proposal scene thingies that i have read on this website! pleassee keep writing more edward POV storiess!

i loved that story a lot it was so romantic edwards thoughts r so much more better than bella's

omg i totally luved it!

Aw.

This story was so sweet and touching!

I loved it.

Oh and it REALLY was Edward. D

I really loved it.

Haahahaha it made me feel all sweet and lovey-dovey inside.

Great story!

The proposal part really tugged at my heartstrings. The anticipation - all the thoughts going through his mind as he said each of the words to her... the way you wrote it out was very effective.

awh...:) that's so cute!

Aww! I love everything in Edward's POV

Good job, I love all of your writing.