yes! next chappi please! it was slow but cute :)...so not bad :)

Really nice. Been missing your work. Update soon

Interesting.

Aw! This is a cute moment!

I love this! Oh they're so effortlessly cute together... *sigh* Can't wait for your next addition!

awesome.
i really like this story too.
they're just so cute together. =]

Hahaha I liked this chapter haha keep it up

See ya ^_^

YAY new chapter! I was afraid that you gave up on this one! but it makes me happy to see you continuing it! I look forward to the next one!

lol, this is nit burger king...that has to be my favorite line! :P can't wait for the next one!

Nice job.

Very interesting chapter.

Yei! this chapi was awesome! can't wait for the next one!

love your story! it was exciting from the very beginning you better keep writing this one cuz I'll be sad if you don't.

Nice! I love the battle, because you put in so much detail and make it so real. It's amazing!

I will say, the cop seems a little slow... because her story has some holes in it. But I also know that cops also need to remember that victims can be shaken up and in shock after an attack, so she might not remember everything clearly. But other than that (and that's just me being a picky jerk) it was very cool, and I enjoyed it very much!

This is a very interesting story. I can't wait to read more.