BDD ... I think I really really like this. XDD It made me laugh so hard in the last chapter where Nick was acting crazy! XDD But then why is he with Maya and Pearls if he had the beanie? Does that mean that he doesn't have Trucy and Polly? BD I don't really mind whichever, as long as I find out what happens in the next chapter! XD But... what if Nick and Miles aren't JUST FRIENDS? BD What if... they're... *gasp* ... ... BEST FRIENDS FOREVER?!?!! 8D .. Okay, I'm just kidding. Anyways. Uh... Great job well done! XD Waiting I shall be! XD tata!

XD this is made of win (But i like yaoi XD) I really hope Phoenix will be able to fix this misunderstanding LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

D: and I wonder what's Miles gonna do?

Haha, that was too cool!

I can't wait to see where this leads.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you!!

Phoenix and Edgeworth to me were like friends that just reunited. I go on and see them as lovers.

It does disgust me. (My sisters don't believe in yaoi, but they insistently believe PxE were the focus of all three games)

Nice first chapter though, You captured Phoenix's sarcastic witty self perfectly. Now to see more...

Looking for the next chapter!

Cool story and well written. I can't wait for my chapters. I'm dying to see where this is going

That was great XD made me laugh, keep it up!

First of all, I'd like to thank you for writing this.

Now...
Alright, I love this story already. The word choice is great, Phoenix is in character (when he gets mad, he does act like that, I mean, it's not shown all the time but there are implied ideas in the game..) and I love the atmosphere and setting. Comfy cozy.

The story feels very natural, keep up the great work. :)

Omg. I remember that one sleepover we had..and we put your ipod on the OBJECTION repeat..bahahahaha to funny. To bad I have like, no idea what's going on because I have never played the game. But you explained most of it to me :P and as always, your writing style is LE BOMB DIGGITY!

This is... interesting. Hope you continue it soon, I'm already pretty pulled in. Phoenix, furious? It's a mood we don't see from him often, so this must be more than just a little white lie this magazine holds.