This is really haunting. It shows the confusion and hurt they both feel but don't understand. Well done

So. Much. Anger. =.=

Crap, that was an intense likkle fella. D: I believe I've expressed this before, but I'll say it again. Your short stories make me ANXIOUS! I know it's going to be this roller coaster ride(or maybe one of those things that takes you way up high and just drops you) so I hold on tight. You never fail to give me a thrill, but GEEZ! Sometimes I want to sob! It just find it so amazing that you can pack so much emotion into such a tiny space. I have to go on and on and on and on for PAGES to put into my stories what you fit into something this size.

You never fail to amaze me. So you get a gold star. :3

Another thing I've always loved about your writing is that while most people can get the emo side of the AkuRoku not everyone can capture the screamo. You can write really /angry/ pieces. A lot of times when authors try to write something that sounds angry it just comes off melancholic. I'm struggling with this myself and many of the fanfictions I see on here focus more on the aspect of "woe is us we cannot love" rather than "we can't !@$#*%#$ feel but you make me want to so I'm going to make you suffer for that."

You want to know what the really great part is? You can go /either/ way and still be incredibly unique. Burden of the Heart was a shining example. It wasn't some carbon copied lament that we've seen before and it was full of real feelings. That's what makes everything you write so special. Your characters have this habit of jumping right off the screen and coming alive. :)

With that being said... Axel and Roxas were freakin' masochists! o.0;; It made me think back to the days of MPFR when Axel and Roxas were smexing on the table and I was thinking, "waow, violence." Granted it was a different kind of violence completely, it just popped into my head...

This chaffed bond that the two shared was really devastating. As a person who has belonged to the KH fandom for over a year I know that the relationship between Axel and Roxas (platonic and otherwise) is always rough, but you have such a way of illustrating it that it comes alive again every time you publish a new story. I love, love, love, love, LOVE it! :3

Give yourself a pat on the back, because you deserve it.

-LOVE- from Leigh

holy crap how sad~ the author's note at the end was cool~ but...POOR GUYS~! super sad face ♥ i loved all the description though~

Gorgeous -- simply gorgeous.

angie. you. are. AMAZING.