I hope you update soon! This is a really good start to an awesome story.

oh my god!! it's a cliffy!! you seriously have got to write up the next chappie!! it's awesome!!

it's really good!
plz update!

Interesting plot and writing style! Good use of descriptions, too. I look forward to the next chapter.

I like it! I'm really interested in seeing where this story goes. Keep up the good work!