That was funny. Is there going to be more

Awe! Allen-chan's falling in love and doesn't realize it!

lol poor allen-kun -_-' well ayway love the plot update soon XDXD

I really like this story! . it has it's mistakes but its still very good! You said in chapter two(I think) that you were looking for a beta. I would be glad to if you still want one. Happy new year and update soon!-MnM

I like the plot and all, but u would get more reviews and readers if you had a beta reader or at least proof read your work. because you got all your tenses wrong and sometime

es u refer to Allen as a he instead of a she at times. please be consistent or you will confuse the readers. if u don't mind, I would like to be your beta reader.

update soon

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this is an epic story!

please do more! :D

PLS PLS PLS More fluff if possible yaoi D: i love it xD

Loved it so far hope you update soon !

MUST HAVE MORE! mature scene *laughs evilly* great idea *evil glint in eye* oooo maybe u should have Allen go out into the hall for like 2 min. and do something random and wen she returns have Cross there. then she would be screwed. in more ways then one *laughs evilly again* hehehehehehe

nice story :)

Mammmmiiiii continue this please

I'm waiting for this 3

Alchemist 12th

Hey DTD!

Your un-official beta here to enquire if you are still alive.

If yes,please respond,if no,well,then that's sad!

-TDL

Please update this chapter its so really good. I want to know the play there making i wish it was funny _

:D

THERE WAS KISS.

Although I have already read all current chapters, I feel bad that I hadn't left a review, especially for this chapter.

This is what- The ONLY CrossxFemale!Allen story I know of?

...

This NEEDS an update.

It must not go unfinished.

But remember, rushed chapters are NEVER good, unless you work best under pressure.