That was a surprsingly nice story... I liked the little vignette-like things...

Woah...I like it! I can totally see something like this happening.

Aw... its so bittersweet. But I loved it. The pain of being with him, yet at the same time not. Wonderfully done. Thanxs! :) :p ;)

Yay go Jacob!
I love how this story and your other stories are sort of dark and depressing (not sure if you meant it or not), but they are also really amazing.
I love your parings as well

I don't usually leave reviews, but I just had to for this one. This took my breath away, about half way through I just forgot to breathe. I've never really understood Team Jacob, honestly. Now though... now I think I do. Thank you.

wow. that was an... ok to tell the truth, that was one fxed up story. but i liked it!

Surroundings and In Tilting are my favorites. and this piece was perfect- great way to use minimal language to paint such a giant picture!

YAY Jacob! rah rah rah!

That was really amazing!

Loved it.

I like this, even though I can't stand Jacob/Bella or Jacob/Nessie. (I am Team Jacob...just not team Jacob/Bella or Jacob/Nessie. xD) Great job.

ahh i love it
emotional
brilliant
love it love it love itt

That was amazing! so short and yet it had more substance then some 10 chapter fanfic's. Nicely done :)

I was never Team Jacob, but that was pretty amazing.

Wow, I really really like the section headings. And the ending was excellent too, in that Edward didn't get angry and there really weren't any consequences for Bella, except there were internally or whatever. There so were. Very nice.
~Ani