Beautiful story; very moving.

That was so good. O my goodness. It's kinda sad, but it really is Leah and that would be whatshe wants. I love it. Great job!

so the second story i've rad from you and again, i'm on the edge of tears*sigh* I think i'm too emotional*lol* Awesome story but so sad!

HOW CAN YOU HATE NESSIE
she's awesome
~!@*Alice~!@*

That was great - oh, Leah. Forever is a long not to love the person you truly love.

This is really good, but sad

I've read this like so many times and just realised I never reviewed it. xD
This is REALLY good. :D

depressing. but very good.

No no..do continue with your hatred of the spawn. =)

You write them all so poetically pathetic..it's beautiful

i hate her too. that was just WRONG! cant leave any of the good ones for the normal chicks/guys. at first i wanted jake but since he "imprinted" i want emmett

thought she could play second fiddle to another woman, and it turns out that it’s the only part she can read the music for.


loved that line- the best in the piece.

Aww that was really heart-wrenching and sad! But it was brilliant how you expressed Jacob & Leah's emotions through such few words! Well done! I'm faving this one! ;)

all of your stories nearly make me cry.

Definitely love your writing. You've added a lot more depth to the characters than there is in the books.

I love it. It was so sad, though. I have this crazy addiction to fan fics that make me want to cry, and even though they're so sad, I love them. This was great. And I hate Nessie also.

Blackwater forever!