| Reviews for Justice League Persiana |
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GrimlockX4 2/24/09 . chapter 14Awesome! _ I loved how Wonder Girl react to meeting Speedy. _ Good luck on chapter 14 and on your other stories too. |
GrimlockX4 2/20/09 . chapter 13Awesome! I can't wait to read chapter 14. Good luck on chapter 15 and on your other stories too. Also I have another great DC/Marvel crossover idea: The Punisher. |
GrimlockX4 2/14/09 . chapter 12Shoot! I was hoping for Wolverine, Thor and maybe Hulk to be transported to the DC verse. Oh, well it's your story and I shouldn't be whining like a spoiled child. _; Good luck on chapter 13 and on your other stories too. I can't wait for the Avengers to meet Brainaic and see his true purposes are. *Laughs evilly* I have my cat Bones here on lap as I am typing this review for you. |
cabrera1234 2/8/09 . chapter 11i think it the avengers or maybe the x-men? |
GrimlockX4 2/8/09 . chapter 11I wonder if it will be Thor or Blade? How about Ghost Rider? The Hulk or Johnny and Ben Grimm/The Thing? That would be so cool if either of them were sent to the DC universe. _ Good luck on chapter 12. I can't wait to see who it will be. P.S. If you can PLEASE add Wolverine, I would so love to see him kick DC villain ass. _ |
GrimlockX4 2/4/09 . chapter 10Cool idea of Cheetah helping Farrah escape from Lex. Good luck on chapter 11. |
cabrera1234 2/4/09 . chapter 10thanks for the update |
GrimlockX4 1/29/09 . chapter 9*Dies from laughing too much* I love the Simpsons part: "Don't have a cow, man". LOL! Good luck on chapter 10 and on your other stories too. |
GrimlockX4 1/23/09 . chapter 8Oh, I'm so going to enjoy reading chapter 9. Good luck on chapter 9. I wonder what Lex wants with Persiana? |
GrimlockX4 1/14/09 . chapter 7Before reading your preemptive answer I thought this story was a slash one. _' Anyways great job ya did on chapter 7. You're very good at writing the chapters out. It takes me a really long time to write the chapters for my stories because of personal issues. The longest chapter I've written has over 9,500 words. The chapter is in my crossover story Power Rangers vs. Cybertron vs. Beast Wars. |
GrimlockX4 1/8/09 . chapter 6I nearly had a heart attacked after reading what happened to Hawk. LOL! Good luck on the next chapter. |
GrimlockX4 12/26/08 . chapter 5Cool job on chapter 5. I really like Farrah/Persiana's personality when she wears clothes that Wonder Woman/Diana wouldn't be caught dead wearing. Good luck on chapter 6. Also have a Happy New Year! |
GrimlockX4 12/22/08 . chapter 4The name of the episode that Diana was banished from Themysciria is called Paradise Lost. Great job on chapter 4. I really like how you wrote about your OC's life in the Marvel universe. Good luck on chapter 5 and Merry Christmas 2008 along with a Happy New Year too! |
GrimlockX4 12/18/08 . chapter 3Spectacular! _ I loved the part mentioning Thor. Good luck on chapter 4. Merry Christmas 2008! |
Kyer 12/18/08 . chapter 3Hope you don't take this in the wrong way. You write well. It's just that... Flash is wrong. I'm not so much feeling awed or freaked as I'm annoyed thinking "is there any *canon* superhero she isn't automatically better than just by existing?" (I'm one of those who read fanficton because they are a fan of the series characters. Your 'fanmade' is making the canon ones look like insufficient idiots. To me, that's palatable only in a villain. Write what you please, but kindly let us know if this is a MarySue au. |