sorry for answering that late° *ashamed*

I like your story because of the way you dealed with Fay's inner perspective and your clear and figurative writing style.

Keep on with it, want to read more!^^

Oh my!! I absolutely love it!! Your story made me so sad and my heart went out to Fai. I'm sure I've read it five times already!! I'd love you forever if you write a sequal..I'd love to read from Kurogane's point of view (I kid, I kid...but you would make me a very happy lady..hahaha!).

Well, until we meet again,

imanut~