you should give hiro's keyblade a twilight form.

donn't remove dont listen to flame its great this is your decision but please dont get rid of this.

great story.

Not bad. I like the use of .hack in this one. Would have preferred G.U. though...

Please write more of the story its great. I wish that Hior would stop distorying worlds that are bad because good is balanced by evil. I think that the two people that show up but nobody see's them is Light and Darkness but usly I'ev read that there at the same age and that Light is a guy and Darkness is a girl. I sujust that they go to a world full of creatures like Griffins, Minitors and Harpyies. I love how the Nobody acts, its realy funny.

Cool story, I would reccomend bringing in Pi-Face, and having a Full Metal Alchemist world.

P.S. Please don't quit.

This was a very interesting chapter. Seemed a bit rushed though; take your time. You have no deadlines.

I love love love this! Please don't quit! *gets down on hands and knees* PLEASE! *starts crying* Pllease...

:D I love this story. :D I usually don't like the next generation stories, but this is wonderful! I love Hiro and Reno and Luna and Morty and Max! :D Morty's so cute! :D Oh man this is getting good! :D I want to see Riku and Sora and Kishi and I'm SO on edge thinking about what happened to Nanami and Kairi! Omg, I'm on edge about everything! :D

Dude, even though I don't know how anyone would pull it off, you should do a Naruto world... or Harry Potter... or somehting else! haha. I'm loving this!

I cna't wait for the next chapter. And their long. I like long chapters even though Short ones are good too, so either one you want to do is fine with me. :D hehe. I'm not picky like most. :D

So, in conclusion, I love this story, the characters, and I want you to update. :D No rush though, I'm in dier need to update my original one myself. *ducks head* hehe. :D

Keep up the great work!

That was definitely a good chapter. It really made me want to play Disgaea, though I don't have a PS2 :P

Chapter 5 was semi good, didn't like it that much, but that one made it up.

You can have a cookie now ^^

This was an awesome chapter. It makes me want to go out and buy Disaega 3 now...what system is it for?

That was so awesome... Man and after The World too!
Man I bet the entire story will be awesome at this rate!

After Ultimo got a new chapter too! (The Manga that's a collaboration between Stan lee and the creator of Shaman king)

Man it was so awesome I though my heart would jump out and start dancing.

Man its so cool that THE WORLD is... well a world...
That's very accurate advertising...
I'd like to see a Netherworld (Disgaea) crossover but... Save the best for later type of thing because that would be so awesome it would knock my socks off.

i suggest the world of Slayers, a great anime in and of itself that i believe, when coupled with kingdom hearts, will make an awesome world for hiro and crew to visit! oh, and Code Geass is a good choice, as well--if you're willing to use as many characters as there are in the anime. hehehe. X3

oh, and if you aren't in the mood for anime, might i suggest a Static Shock crossover? technically still animated, but not anime. so technically it's not the same.

well, that's it from me. can't wait until the next chapter!

-MKL, signing out.

"The world’s made up of numbers! I’ve been reverse-engineering my desired solution all along!" -Sho Minamimoto, The World Ends With You

:D This was a fantastic chapter.

As for worlds...how about Spirited Away? (You could so get away with it...it has the 'Disney' logo right on the cover.)

YAY!
Your awesome so don't you dare quit on me!
+))