|Reviews for Down Fast|
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 12/21/08 . chapter 1
First of all, I would like to profusely apologize for not reviewing sooner. I know I'm normally the first person to review your stories, unfortunately, your story happened to get posted right at the height of finals week for me. But I'm off for the rest of the year, so I get two weeks to catch up on some Fanfiction!
Okay, sheesh, where do I start? Everything about this was utterly fantastic, what can I say. The characterizations were spot-on as usual and it was so heartbreakingly accurate it killed me.
I love you bringing out Sadie's maternal side. I always sort of pictured her as the mother hen of the group, and this fic definitely accentuates that.
It was also horribly and achingly realistic that only a few remained from the group. I mean, we'd like to think that they're the best of friends and they'll live happily ever after for the rest of their lives together, but it makes much more sense that they kind of disbanded.
And of course I should expect this from you, since this has always been something you do, but may I thank you from the bottom of my heart that you keep ALL characters in character even when it's a one character centric fic? It's quite rare to find authors who take the time to do that, and even though this was clearly Sadie centirc, Max and JoJo were so nicely characterized, I can't stand it. The whole thing with Prudence taking his bathrobe was simply hysterical.
Well, I hope this decently long review makes up for my tardiness. Please, please write more. I'll be waiting D
| Avenue B 12/12/08 . chapter 1
This was incredible. I wish I could say something more than that, but that's what it was. Incredible.
I also wish I could pick out a favorite part, but I can't do that because everything stuck out to me. I did like how you added in little things with the other characters, like Max and Desmond. It made them seem much more... human, I suppose.
| blackbirdxsinging 12/12/08 . chapter 1
Thankyou, I needed that today.
I noticed a lot of references, by my favourite was
‘I would be incredibly pleased if someone would have the foresight to notice me drowning and come and help me,’ you just... scream.”
I miss John so much. And the quote wasnt forced in or anything, it fit. Nicely done.