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fenwayrox24
2009-10-15 . chapter 5
Please continue! Its a great story!
T.Beedle
2009-07-01 . chapter 5
could realy go on with this i like it
vampire-luvr
2009-06-30 . chapter 5
lmao, sounds like you know some interesting children. funny story!
LeiaOrganicSolo
2009-06-28 . chapter 2
“I’ve been braising myself for you wrath all afternoon. And this is what I get?” He smirked. “Should I infuriate you more often?”

am i correct? do i get a cybercookie? lol. anywho, luv ur story!!
serindraxx
2009-06-23 . chapter 5
was it a babysitting job? if so, i hope i never have to deal with it lol good chapter! update soon!

~Serindraxx~
LILY R0SE
2009-06-23 . chapter 3
yes it was a very good semi-lime lol
:)
hollandsemum
2009-06-22 . chapter 2
Hi,
Early on in this chapter you have Harry say "braising". What you need to use is "bracing". Braising is a method of cooking using a tiny bit of liquid. Bracing is to strengthen something.
ngayonatkailanman
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
This is just so funny and very heartwarming!
ngayonatkailanman
2009-06-22 . chapter 4
LOL. Absolutely marvelous.
ngayonatkailanman
2009-06-22 . chapter 3
A lemon is a fruit. What has that got to do with anything. Of course I would not be happy to read about fruits. I like eating them but reading about them is boring.

Anyhow, this is a very good chapter.
kt.potter93
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
hahaha-nice chapter:)
lol-teddy sounds so cute :P
bukster
2009-04-16 . chapter 4
love the story. Thought it was really fluffy and very funny.
toffeecakesxox.
2009-01-20 . chapter 4
so cute! -squeal- I love Harry & Ginnyy! :D

-toffeecakesxox.
caity.cullen
2009-01-19 . chapter 4
ahaha, nice chapter :)
serindraxx
2009-01-19 . chapter 4
update again soon! please!

~Serindraxx~
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